the village film

I've begun implementing some of the suggestions made on the comments blog into the actual script. This process should pick up in the next couple weeks as I am now able to devote more quality time to the project.

If you want to see the changes in action, check out the script. The recently updated portions are in bold.

Please don't forget to keep making your comments and critiques.

[plus: thanks to Tyson for all the sweet new storyboards!]

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